Congratulations

What I believe is the greatest strength of this flash, is the fact that you can convey such a message without even using any words. That is what makes it stand out amongst all the other great flashes.

Not bad

It was dark, the effects were cool and the music went along very well with it.

But the drawings and animations were not very good. Honestly if I could choose between a flash with many special effects versus one that has a bit more time spent in animating/good drawings I would go for the latter. I can not feel quite as emotionally effected by something as stunning as murder when the animation is too simplistic and the colors very bright.

Go for a darker color scheme next time you do a dark story, give me the mood lighting and scenery that will draw me in.

And I ahve nothing against anime style drawings but triangle heads are a bit much. x_x

I like your style

With both of your flashes I have seen an appealing drawing style and just enough humor to make me smile. Of course the major complaint here (despite the whole description n all) will be "it is short, there isn't really any content" but I'm sure you are well aware of that when you make something that is only a few seconds long. Either way I express my enjoyment to you.
ENJOYMENT.

great work as always

And of course it is unfortunate it is a demo, but hey, it's completely justified. Either way you are obviously really skilled in flash and it's good to see someone in the adult flash zone who is talented.
The only thing that kind of bothers me in this one is the fact that Naota is under 18. That just disturbs me a little bit...

Fun but tricky

I found myself playing this about 15 times because I was interested to see what lay at the end of the graveyard, or what other objects would pop up as I progressed. The controls are very simple and easy to get used to, but I found that no matter how many times I played I still found it always far easier to fail than succeed. It is good to have a degree of difficulty so it isn't childishly easy, but I could never get past the coffins in all the times I played, and having to start over at the beginning and still being able to die there just as easily did get a little frustrating.
The game itself isn't badly designed, it has clean graphics sort of nice moody sound and doesn't feel too glitchy. In the end I thought it was fun, but I was a bit sad I could not progress without frustration.